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The Elder Eyes: Earthbound

By Nipaporn Baldwin


Published by Geppetto Garten/Nipaporn Baldwin at Smashwords


Copyright 2011 by Nipaporn Baldwin


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The Elder Eyes: Earthbound


From the wastes of the Unforgiving,

A woman was born anew

The sun had forged life into her

While the moon untangled her spirit’s misfortunes

This new life was taken from the wastes

And carried off, by a Dragon, to the desperate planet of Earthbound

She fell from the sky and hit the roof of the cottage belonging to a married couple

They saved her from the on-coming forty-year winter

This woman said, “I have no name.”

So the couple named her Afrearth

Which was half the name of the forsaken planet she dropped to

And inside they stayed, always finding things to do, staying together


But when the husband went out to the city and never returned,

Afrearth decided to set out in an expedition to find him

She followed his path using the pangs she got in her chest whenever she went off-trail

She went through the blistering cold mountains

And trekked through the forests of Tind, which were filled with dragons that sang in the trees


The city was a marvel itself, but she could not gaze long at its beauty

After searching through the village, Afrearth found the husband

His body was on a spike and his eyeballs had been cut out

He had been dead for days

And the crows were feasting off his rotting flesh


Demanding answers, she marched to the Castle at the center of the city

The King was not a pleasant one to be around

On her knees, she asked why the husband had been killed in such a horrid way

“Well well, a brown child from Terra dares to question me? You have no say in our methods of execution! Begone, impure brat, or we’ll feed your head to the Alien Dragons.”

Afrearth’s anger was boiling and the planet boiled with it

From the sky of Earthbound came a thundering rainstorm unlike any the inhabitants have seen


One of the young jesters spoke out, “No! She has the Elder Eyes!”

The King jolted from his throne, “What? No! The body of the elders was lost in the interstellar space long ago!”

Afrearth had already knew of the elder Eyes, but she did not know she had possessed it

She stood and ran to the King with unimaginable speed, and instincts started taking over

“Who gave you the order to execute my husband?”

The King knew the man didn’t belong to her, but fearing her anger, he stammered, “The Empress of Xenesia…the Empress of Xenesia…she lives on the cliff by the dragon ruins.”


Afrerth had heard of the cruel empire, Xeresia

They were notorious for silencing innocents that knew of their Empress’s secrets

They would also kill innocents for fun, and sometimes their own

“Give me a map!”



With the King’s map of Earthbound’s Capolin continent, Afrearth set her next destination point to the city of Xeresia


The journey there was more dangerous than she expected

The trees of the forests were dead and had been inhabited by spider webs from itty-bitty spiders

The ruins were no pick-me-up either

Sharknowls, Wolves and Garigo Dragons were the inhabitants and made sure Afrearth’s passage through there would not be an easy feat


Finally she arrived at the Crystal city of Xeresia by midnight

And the seemingly endless fog did not help in discovering the city’s base

It was eerily silent and the crystals glowed whenever she passed by

She knew the Empress would use the crystals and the fog to her advantage

Afrearth knew she could take whatever the Empress had

Arrows were thrown at her, beastly creatures were unleashed to maul her, and even a few dragons from the Ruins were called to the Empress’s aid

But whatever the danger, Afrearth eventually overcame it


She used the power of the thunderstorm to break open the crystal castle’s gates

And there she met the Empress of Xeresia, waiting patiently for her


The Empress, with open arms, spoke kindly, “I see my space child has come at last! Welcome home, Afrearth!”


“Why do you talk such foolishness?” Afrearth asked

“You do not know? I dropped you in the wastes of the Unforgiving, and the serpent’s kiss made you into what you are today.”


Afreath shook her head, “No. I’m from the bloodline of the Elders!”

The Empress tensed, “so…I see you’ve met your Father.”

“No, no I haven’t.”

“How do you know of the Elder Eyes?”

“I researched it…I was born from the Unforgiving and was delivered here by a Dragon.”

The Empress withdrew her sword, “enough of your silly stories, young child. Why have you come to my domain.”

Afrearth, with authority in her tone, said, “I have come to avenge my father and all the innocents you’ve killed.”


The Empress had the first move, which was a rather blindly stupid one

She lunged toward Afrearth with an intent to slice her leg, but the girl stabbed her sword deep into the Empress’s stomach


“Why would you make such a stupid move?” Afrearth asked.

The Empress smiled, “the last one to kill me will be cursed by the blood of Xeresians. I’ve waited too long to see your misery.”

Afrearth, realizing her naïveté heart had turned to burning revenge, started to remember all of the old legends


The one with the eyes of the Elders will be exploited by love

And said love will falsify itself into her very soul

Her eyes will be deceived and she will wrongingly fall for the curse of the Ancients

And her Eyes will be a portal for the demon-aliens to pass through

Thus bringing the Age of the Beasts

Only the blade of the Entroiss can erase the demons

But the Elder Eyes alone can quell the hunger of Xeresegnar



“You’re…you…you baited me.”

Afrearth dropped the sword

And her green eyes turned gray

“No, child,” the Empress chuckled, “I only awakened you.”



Afrearth, now feeling discouraged, picked up the sword and left the crystal palace

In the sky, the clouds formed in a circle, and from this hole the aliens started coming through

Afrearth’s journey home was a quiet one

The dangerous creatures of the forests watched her, not caring to attack

And the Dragons of the Tind forest didn’t sing like they had before


The forty-year winter had ended when she returned to the cottage

And the fifty year summer was beginning

The heat was stifling and the humidity was high


She was afraid of entering the cottage, but knew she had to sooner or later

When she opened the door she saw the wife sitting in a rocking chair with the smallest child


“Yonda?” she called.

The wife looked u, her smile expressing her happiness at seeing Afrearth

Afrearth closed the door, “I have something dreadful to tell you.”



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